A rush
A whoosh
A breath
From the Spirit
And mine
Soared
Out of body
Blissfully free
To thee
My friend
My maker.
© Millicent Danker
Spirit Mountain (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
15 March 2002
SPIRIT FRIEND
Sacred Art & Other Poems
A rush
A whoosh
A breath
From the Spirit
And mine
Soared
Out of body
Blissfully free
To thee
My friend
My maker.
© Millicent Danker
Spirit Mountain (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
15 March 2002
Sacred Art & Other Poems 
Thank you for visiting!
I like it. I however think it would be more empowering if you added more details like how it felt, where you were, what it made you feel.
Thank you for your suggestions. I will try – however, it was a very personal and intense experience so I am not sure how far to go! All good wishes, Millicent
I could feel the emotion in it. From a young writer I would say for the deeper the experience let it go deeper. Let the people see, feel what you do. Let them be in the moment with you. All the same I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing part of this life experience with all of us.
thanks a bunch for the encouraging words
You’re very welcome. 🙂